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Sunday, February 28, 2016

Bonita Faye by Margaret Moseley



Blurb:

When small town girl Bonita Faye's abusive husband, car salesman, and fishing guide Billy Roy is killed, she begins an adventurous new life that takes her from Poteau, Oklahoma to Paris and back again in a story of murder and redemption...and more murder...stretching over three decades.

About the Author:

Margaret Moseley was born in Oklahoma, reared in Texas and lived twenty years in Arkansas. Her resulting combined regional accent gives the reader of her best selling book and Edgar finalist Bonita Faye a unique flavor to her protagonist Bonita Faye's trials and tribulations. While the reader knows from the "get-go" that Bonita Faye killed Billy Roy up there on Cavanal Hill, it's a toss-up as to how she will spend the next forty years. Told in the first person, readers will laugh and gasp as Bonita Faye deliberately weaves and molds her future with the book's climax having her face another murderous decision!

Moseley writes very different mysteries, but whether her books involve a witness to a murder—Milicent LeSueur—or follow the sleuthing of Texas bookseller Honey Huckleberry—The Fourth Steven; Grinning In His Mashed Potatoes; A Little Traveling Music, Please—her writing is creative, whimsical and entertaining. Moseley currently lives in Texas with her writer/computer programmer husband Ron Burris and their two indescribable rescued Beagles, Matilda and Sadie.

Review by Rochelle:

I have never met such a lovable murderer. Bonita Faye is frying chicken perfectly when Deputy Sheriff Harmon Adams comes to the door to tell her that her husband’s been shot. He stays for lunch and is still there when the church ladies descend. I’m afraid I startled my neighbor when I got to this part, because I laugh out loud and I’d been reading so quietly by the elevator while I waited for my laundry, she hadn’t noticed me until I guffawed. But really, I just had to laugh.

“They just start coming to the house of death just as sure as if there were a steeple over it with a bell tolling a message, ‘Someone’s dead. Come one, come all. There’s food to be had and kitchens to clean. …

“Years later…my best friend Patsy and I made a pact. Whoever died first, the survivor would come and clean out the crumbs from the silverware drawer before the church ladies got there.”

Bonita Faye is one of those books that should come with a warning: “Choking Hazard! Do not eat or drink while reading this book.”

And that’s not even the coolest thing about Bonita Faye. It’s a masterpiece of language. Told in first person, the beginning of the book was a grammatical mess that kind of drove the editor in me nuts. The narrative was full of “ain’ts” and double negatives. “I ain’t never seen…” Grrr… But Bonita Faye is a high school drop-out living in Oklahoma in the late forties/early fifties. How could she possibly speak any other way? Eventually, she receives an education, and the quality of the narrative grows as Bonita Faye gains sophistication. The “ain’ts” and double negatives disappear.

I couldn’t put down Bonita Faye. She was warm, witty, and loveable, despite being a murderer. But it was “just a little murder.” And she planned to be sure whoever died first—her or her best friend Patsy—the silverware drawer would be clean.

Heat Rating:  G
Length:  240 Pages
Prices:
Print:
Hardcover:  $20.00
Paperback:  $11.99
Digital:  $2.99

Thanks for visiting. Donna, Julie, & Rochelle

Sunday, February 7, 2016

An American Dynasty by Jon D. Zimmer


Blurb:

An American Dynasty is the story of one family’s rise from the extreme poverty of the Great Depression to a dynasty of wealth and politics.

They are a family filled with empathy for their fellow countrymen as Jack Gilbert struggles with the paradoxes of the Great Depression: "Why are people hungry when there is enough food for everyone? Why are so many people without shelter when we can provide shelter for everyone? Why is there such an abundance of ignorance when we have the ability to educate everyone?"

They are a family of lust… [and] passion…. They are a family that knows death… [and are] fearful for their country’s future.…

About the Author:

I was unable to find a biography for Mr. Zimmer.



Review by Rochelle:

I would have given thorns to An American Dynasty because it was so poorly written and apparently not edited, but it managed to hold my attention despite my frustration while reading it. And before I even delve into the book, I have to say something about the cover. Who the heck came up with a cover showing a couple dressed in what appears to be Colonial era garb for a book that starts in the 1930s? The cover doesn't seem to represent the book at all.

The book is supposedly written in third person present, but the author can’t figure out from there how to express things that have happened in the past. Apparently neither he nor whoever edited this tome has any clue how to use past or past-perfect tenses, which about drove me nuts.

Mr. Zimmer could also use some vocabulary lessons, or at least a dictionary, as he frequently misuses words. Here’s an example: “Jack knows she is having heart rendering thoughts that are brought on by her appearance.” That should be “heart-rending.” One of Webster’s definitions for “rending” is “to lacerate mentally or emotionally.” “Rendering” means “to melt down…to hand down (as in a decision)…to restore.” I doubt the lady’s heart is melting down or being restored. She’s disfigured and worried the scars on her face will scare Jack away. She’s torn between love and fear.


There’s a dearth of hyphens in An American Dynasty, as well. Did no one teach Mr. Zimmer or his editor that adjectival and adverbial phrases need to be hyphenated? These are phrases that together modify another word. For instance: A tiger is a black-striped cat. Black and stripe unite to describe the cat, and therefore should be hyphenated. “Heart-rending” describes Joshette’s thoughts and should be hyphenated. There are plenty of adjectival and adverbial phrases in this book but not one is properly hyphenated.

Finally, if you're going to write about the military, do your homework. There are no second lieutenants or desk sergeants in the Navy. That would be an ensign and a yeoman, whose rank could be anywhere from yeoman apprentice to master-chief yeoman. (For some reason, the Navy in its infinite wisdom stationed a yeoman who faints at the sight of blood at the Oakland Navy Hospital, and we were roommates.  If you happen to be reading this, I still think of you Nana M.)

Normally, I would give thorns to a book this poorly written. In fact, I would have difficulty even finishing a book this poorly written, but there was a nugget, a kernel of something in the story that kept me reading. Therefore, I’m giving it one rose.

Heat Rating:  PG-13 (Violence)
Length:  185 Pages
Prices:
Print:  $8.99
Digital:  $0.99

Thanks for visiting. Donna, Julie, & Rochelle